โ€œSweet mother of Jesus, somebody get me some eyes in there.โ€

Samuel looked at his boss with a smirk. He wasnโ€™t being ironic, despite the fact millions of viewers were watching.

Channel 6 had been hi-jacked and the moment the cameras stopped rolling it was game over.

โ€œThirty seconds sir, and weโ€™ll be able to see more than the stage.โ€

Lieutenant Jefferson gave a distracted nod and Samuel knew he had to be feeling the pressure. They were in the middle of a circus.

News crews, media groupies, concerned citizensย and emergency services, they all added up to one thing. They were about to go global.

โ€œTell me what we know,โ€ Jefferson said, focusing his attention on Samuel.

โ€œWe just got confirmation Richard Beckett is inside. I spoke with his commanding officer and you were right, he was Special Forces. Given the sophistication of the bomb…โ€ Samuel broke off and motioned towards the monitor in front of them. โ€œSir, weโ€™re in.โ€

Jefferson whistled long and low when he saw the screen. โ€œThey plastered the poor guyโ€™s personal life all over national television. Iโ€™d say they missed a crucial part of the story.โ€

Beckettโ€™s wife had been a contestant on Dance With Me the year before. Sheโ€™d had a public affair with her dance partner, which led to the breakdown of her marriage.

โ€œIโ€™d say that oversight came back to bite them on the ass.โ€ Samuelโ€™s eyes flicked to the other monitor where the show was being broadcast live.

The camera cut to a close up of Matthew Flemmingโ€™s face. He was starting to show the strain of dancing for three hours straight. His boyish good looks had earned him the devotion of hundreds of fans, and his new plight would earn him hundreds more.

Richard Beckett had planted a series of bombs beneath the studio floor. On the night of the live final, heโ€™d sat in the audience and waited until Matthew Flemming took to the stage, before arming the device.

A pre-recorded message was rigged to broadcast the moment he pressed the button. Its purpose was to gain attention swiftly and with minimum fuss. Mathew Flemming was now standing on a giant pressure plate. If he stopped dancing, or even missed a step, the entire floor would blow.

Nobody doubted his sincerity, not after his breakdown the week before. Heโ€™d attacked the reporter doing a back story for the new show and his vow of revenge had gone viral.

The threat wasnโ€™t taken seriously, not then. But when he interrupted the broadcast with his list of demands, the producers finally got it. Theyโ€™d created a monster.

His instructions were simple. As long as they kept the cameras rolling, and Matthew worked those feet, nobody got hurt.

Any deviation from the plan; a trigger happy security guard, anxious spectator, would-be hero, and he detonated the device. In his words, he had nothing left to lose.

โ€œWhatโ€™s the endgame here? What does he hope to achieve?โ€ Samuel wondered aloud.

He turned to Lieutenant Jefferson. โ€œBeckettโ€™s made no demands since he took over the show. It just doesnโ€™t add up.โ€

โ€œI agree. Something else is going on here,โ€ Jefferson said.

They both turned to watch Matthew Flemming move across the floor with his usual style and grace. If he was tired of the song he didnโ€™t show it.

It was a cruel twist of fate that the track turned out to be โ€˜Staying Alive.โ€™ There was no way Beckett could have anticipated it.

It wouldย be so easy to blame Matthew, Samuel thought. He knew many people did, because they believed what they read; that Matthew was a ladies man and used his natural charm to get ahead. No matter what the cost. Itโ€™s what theyโ€™d fed to Beckett.

But it didnโ€™t matter now because, whatever happened, there would be no winner.

His main priority was the innocent people trapped inside the studio, guilty of nothing more than being fans of the show.

โ€œHoly shit!โ€

Samuel snapped to attention when he heard the exclamation and his own profanities turned the air blue when he spotted Sandra Beckett running across the stage.

The explosion took them all by surprise, a moment before the screens went black. The silence, after so much sound, was almost as shocking as the realisation it was over.

Samuelโ€™s eyes sought out the Lieutenantโ€™s and what he saw cleared his head like a slap. Why, if theyโ€™d just lost, did his boss look so happy?

31 responses to “Please don’t stop the music”

  1. Harliqueen Avatar

    Wow! That was really exciting ๐Ÿ˜€

  2. mbarkersimpson Avatar

    Thanks. I enjoy taking part in the speakeasy ๐Ÿ™‚

  3. Martha B Avatar
    Martha B

    What a fun and clever story! I love where you took the prompts, and I love an explosive ending. ๐Ÿ™‚ nicely done!

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      Thanks, Martha ๐Ÿ™‚ I’m glad you enjoyed it. M.

  4. paulmclem Avatar
    paulmclem

    I’d happily see every TV studio which hosts crappy talent shows/celebs dancing/celebs ice-skating etc blown to smithereens. Thanks for the idea!

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      I’m not sure that’s where I was going with it, but you’re welcome I guess! Seriously though, thanks for the comment, and for the word smithereens! ๐Ÿ™‚ M.

  5. Stacie Avatar

    I really enjoyed your story, especially the explosive ending! Just FYI, you are supposed to use the sentence prompt as it. Technically, changing the tense is not allowed.

    1. Stacie Avatar

      As is, not as it!

    2. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      Oops! Thanks for bringing this to my attention. I’ve edited the sentence. I didn’t change the tense intentionally, I must have copied it down wrong. Glad you enjoyed it, despite the faux pas ๐Ÿ™‚ Mel.

  6. tinsenpup Avatar

    You do action really well. This was very compelling. I want more though!

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      Thanks so much ๐Ÿ™‚

  7. habibadanyal Avatar

    This reminded me of the movie “speed”. Good one.

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      Thanks ๐Ÿ™‚ glad you enjoyed it.

  8. ranu802 Avatar

    Way to go Melissa,what an exciting story.

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      Thanks, I appreciate that. Glad you enjoyed it ๐Ÿ™‚

  9. Suzanne Avatar

    Intense! And a fun read, despite the explosive ending (or maybe because of it!). Great use of the prompts, Melissa! ๐Ÿ™‚

  10. mbarkersimpson Avatar

    Thanks, I appreciate that. It was a lot of fun this week, despite the word challenge. For me, it will always be difficult to keep a tale short and sweet ๐Ÿ™‚

  11. Valerie Milton Avatar

    That was pretty incredible. I really enjoyed your use of the prompts, and I thought Matthew’s plight was well-thought out. Unique story.

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      Thanks, Valerie. That’s lovely to hear. I’m so glad you enjoyed the story and appreciate the comment. Mel

  12. Silverleaf Avatar

    Great story! I was on the edge of my seat ๐Ÿ™‚

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      Thank you. I was hoping to create a little drama ๐Ÿ™‚ Mel

  13. jannatwrites Avatar

    Very creative revenge – you had me hanging on til the end!

  14. mbarkersimpson Avatar

    Thank you. I’m glad it held your interest ๐Ÿ™‚

  15. Esther Avatar

    You used live action so well in this story, giving us backstory as the story unfolded. Nice job!

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      Thanks so much, I really appreciate your feedback ๐Ÿ™‚ Glad you enjoyed it. Mel

  16. tinkerbelle96 Avatar

    The suspense was gripping! Well done!

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      Thank you ๐Ÿ™‚ glad you enjoyed it. Mel

  17. atrm61 Avatar

    Poor fans!Moral-don’t be in the live audience of any reality show-who knows who is planning a revenge ;-)Enjoyed this very much-had me on tenterhooks:-)

  18. mbarkersimpson Avatar

    Thank you, I appreciate that. The fans didn’t necessarily perish – I hadn’t decided their fate so left it up to my lovely readers ๐Ÿ™‚ I’m so glad you enjoyed it. Mel

  19. Renada Styles Avatar

    I was plopped right into the center of the action! It makes we want to know what happened next!

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      Thank you ๐Ÿ™‚ glad you enjoyed it.

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