5 day photo challenge
Colleen fromΒ Silver ThreadingΒ kindly set me this intriguing challenge. The rules are simple:

Post a photo each day for five consecutive days, and tell a story about each photo.Β  The story can be truth or fiction, poetry or prose.Β  Each day one must also nominate a fellow blogger to participate in the challenge.

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Click on the image to see the origin.

I decided to try a dialogue only piece today. It’s interesting how it turned out, because this is not the conversation I had in mind. But who am I except a vessel for the interesting voices in my head!

“You’all right?”

“Now is that any way to speak to a lady?”

“My apologies. How are you, Beatrice, on this fine and sunny afternoon?”

“Now you’re humouring me. Should I be worried that you sought me out?”

“I’m no threat to you, if that’s what you mean.”

“Which implies there is a threat.”

“Does it?”

“I’ve never understood you. Perhaps that’s why I’m afraid.”

“Everyone would be afraid in your position. My role has never been an easy one.”

“No, I guess not. In fact yours must be a lonely existence.”

“It can be.”

“Are things so bad that you’ve taken up drinking?”

“This? No I found it lying by the swings where anyΒ child might find it.”

“The world is full of morons. I’ve always said so.”

“It is not our place to judge. That’s not why we were created.”

“Why must you always sound so condescending?”

“I’m condescending because I choose to see the best in people?”

“No, because you never break or bend the rules. It’s exhausting.”

“It’s funny. But that’s the easiest part of my job.”

“Which brings us right back to the beginning. What happens now?”

“It’s time for you to return home, Beatrice. Our kind are not meant to spend prolonged periods on Earth.”

“And yet you’ve been here longer than all of us.”

“Because it’s my responsibility to take care of you.”

“There you go patronising me again. What of my current assignments?”

“They’re already taken care of.”

“Then I guess there’s nothing left to say.”

“I guess not. Be well, Beatrice. I’ll see you again.”

“Will you still be my handler when I return?”

“Of course. I always take care of my own.”

***

I would like to extend the challenge to Gina Briganti today. I’m not sure she has the time to participate at the moment, but if her schedule allows it we’ll be in for a treat!

Thanks for stopping by. Until next time.

Mel

30 responses to “5 Days – 5 Photos Challenge – Day 4: Hierarchy”

  1. Charles Yallowitz Avatar

    Really curious about this. For some reason I keep thinking of aliens that are reincarnated as humans. Each species has a caretaker that stays on the planet to act as a Reaper/Guide/whatever.

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      I love that idea! That sounds like a great story right there πŸ˜‰

      1. Charles Yallowitz Avatar

        Always a lot of fun with aliens and reincarnation. Though I think it does come close to something. Just can’t put my finger on it.

      2. mbarkersimpson Avatar

        It can be annoying when that happens! But I love the way people interpret things differently (it’s actually one of my favourite things about co-working with other interpreters). To be honest I wasn’t thinking aliens, I was thinking angels. But I like the alien reincarnation angle – it sounds like tremendous fun!

      3. Charles Yallowitz Avatar

        I did think angels, but wasn’t sure if that’s because I’ve been watching a lot of Supernatural lately.

      4. mbarkersimpson Avatar

        I must catch up on Supernatural. I’m so far behind – I haven’t see the consequences of the Mark of Cain yet!

      5. Charles Yallowitz Avatar

        Just started Season 9. So I think you’re ahead of me.

      6. mbarkersimpson Avatar

        Phew…thank goodness I didn’t reveal any major spoilers then! I’m towards the end of Season 9 – not seen the conclusion yet but I’ve heard what happens (my brother has a big mouth) πŸ˜€

      7. Charles Yallowitz Avatar

        I caught the end of Season 9 by accident. Just the last 30 seconds, which confuses me.

      8. mbarkersimpson Avatar

        Ah oh, that’s unfortunate! I can imagine why it’s confusing, as a lot happened in Season 9 leading up to the climax. Enjoy catching up. I think I might watch a few episodes today πŸ˜€

      9. Charles Yallowitz Avatar

        I’ll see how far I get. Depends on if the shows I watch on the TV have new stuff or not. Think I’m good for this week.

      10. mbarkersimpson Avatar

        I’m trying not to think of all the shows I have to catch up on! I haven’t watched TV in the past two or three weeks so they’re piling up. I’ve given myself the afternoon though because I’m mostly caught up on my jobs!

      11. Charles Yallowitz Avatar

        I cut out a lot of shows a while back or the ones I was into ended. Either cancelled or just finished.

      12. mbarkersimpson Avatar

        That’s annoying. There are so many shows that end just as I get into them! Then again, I still haven’t recovered from Firefly and it’s been a while πŸ˜‰

      13. Charles Yallowitz Avatar

        I’m actually over Firefly. For a ‘dead’ show, it sure gets a lot of comics, books, convention influence, mentions in other things, a movie, etc. There are a bunch of one season, poorly treated shows I wish got that kind of afterlife. Brisco County Jr. and Almost Human to name two of them. πŸ™‚

      14. mbarkersimpson Avatar

        Haven’t heard of Brisco County Jr. But I absolutely loved Almost Human. I was bitterly disappointed when they cancelled it, so I agree with you – the show deserves recognition. I also particularly enjoyed the show Intelligence.

      15. Charles Yallowitz Avatar

        Brisco is from the 90’s with a young Bruce Campbell. Sci-fi Western with a magical edge to it at times. Felt like a ‘before it’s time’ thing.

      16. mbarkersimpson Avatar

        I should look into that. It sounds great πŸ˜€

  2. callummclaughlin Avatar

    Another unexpected but excellent piece πŸ™‚

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      Thanks, Callum πŸ˜€ I enjoy dialogue only pieces so it was nice to indulge!

  3. Jacqui Murray Avatar

    I love that, Mel. The first thing I thought when I saw the photo was, It’s her son. We can’t choose our kids’ lives. I like yours better, though.

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      Thanks, Jacqui, I love the different interpretations. It would be so much fun to read the conversations in other people’s heads πŸ˜€

  4. Silver Threading Avatar
    Silver Threading

    I can see this conversation really taking place! Well done, Mel!!! ❀

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      Thanks, Colleen β™‘

  5. jazzfeathers Avatar

    Lovely πŸ™‚
    I kind of expected something similar (I thought the boy was Death), but I enjoyed it all the same.

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      Hm…Death would have been interesting. I love Thanatos!

  6. Patricia Lynne (@plynne_writes) Avatar

    I like what you hinted at. It tickles the imagination.

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      I thought you might πŸ˜‰

  7. Alex Hurst Avatar
    Alex Hurst

    I went between thinking them reapers, to angels, to the MiB of another world… it’s a very open-ended conversation! Nice. πŸ™‚

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      Thanks, Alex πŸ˜€

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