5 day photo challengeColleen fromΒ Silver ThreadingΒ kindly set me this intriguing challenge. The rules are simple:

Post a photo each day for five consecutive days, and tell a story about each photo.Β  The story can be truth or fiction, poetry or prose.Β  Each day one must also nominate a fellow blogger to participate in the challenge.

 

I cheated a little today, or maybe I should say you get two pieces of writing instead of one – it has a better ring to it.

I thought of Maddison when I looked at the picture, and so I decided to write an extension to one of my scenes from The Contract. The part in italic is from the novella, a bonus extract if you will! The rest I wrote for the final part of the challenge.

Before we begin, I’d just like to thank Colleen for the opportunity. I’ve thoroughly enjoyed the writing practice and hope you’ve enjoyed reading my pieces for the five day challenge.

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Background information: Maddison is a hunter. She accepts an assignment which, for her, should have been a walk in the park. But it quickly becomes clear there are other factors at play. In the following scene, she is blowing off some steam with fellow hunter, and friend, Riley (who is a werewolf).

 

β€œI have a feeling things are about to get complicated.”

He relaxed into a grin. Riley liked complicated, perhaps too much. β€œDo you want some back up?”

β€œNot right now.” Her gaze roamed the table. β€œBut I’ll let you know if I’m in a tight spot.” He was one of the few hunters she trusted with her life. Before joining forces with Jonas and the others, she’d worked almost exclusively with Zachariah. Riley was one of the exceptions.

β€œNot hungry?” he asked, when she made no move to retrieve her plate.

β€œNot anymore.”

He smiled, all teeth and testosterone. β€œDo you want to blow off some steam?”

The way her thoughts circled back to Tobias pissed her off. She wanted to hit something. β€œWhat did you have in mind?”

β€œI’ll race you to the Golden Arches,” Riley said, without hesitation. β€œWinner gets the prize.”

Her brows shot up. β€œWhat’s the prize?”

β€œThe satisfaction of the chase.” His expression told her it should have been obvious.

She snorted. β€œPlease, I could beat you blind-folded.”

β€œYou keep telling yourself that.” His eyes brightened to sharp orange as he allowed his animal to surface.

Challenge sang through her. She couldn’t outrun him in wolf form, but she had a few tricks. β€œOkay. Deal.” She pushed up from her chair. β€œLet’s go.”

Β They walked in silence through the old building, down the once stately corridors and out through the marble covered entrance. Merc Hall, as she liked to call it, was situated in the centre of thirteen portals. Of course, to the unseeing eye, those portals were mundane looking street signs, but their location came in handy.

Thanks to a sorcerer with a unique sense of humour, gateways to arcane dimensions were only accessible by passing beneath directional signposts. Given their visibility, it made passage impossible without a cloaking spell. Tonight, Maddy stepped under the worn, degraded metal without giving it a second thought. It was a ghost town.

β€œI’ll give you a head start,” Riley growled, as soon as the forest emerged.

β€œNot going to need it.” Without looking at him, she sprinted across the soft, brown earth, chased by the sound of his laughter.

The thundering sound of Firmani Falls soon drowned out the echo of his mirth; a beautiful, natural creation which, to Maddison created an intriguing juxtaposition for what lay behind the waterfall. The hidden caves were home to the Nrikabats, a particularly foul species of demon. With any luck they would encounter a scout in the area. She was feeling mean.

Maddison didn’t waste any time. As soon as she reached the turbulent water she dove in; her suit adjusting to the temperature. It also acted as camouflage, the colour mimicking the light and shadows so Maddison blended with the environment.

Try tracking my scent now, wolf-man.

With an almost leisurely grace, she kicked her legs to go deeper. Maddison felt vibrations tickle her skin; a sensation which made her teeth rattle the moment she was beneath the fast flowing spray.

As she broke the surface at the other side, she realised her mistake. Her ears were still ringing with the ferocious music of the Falls. It cost her. She felt Riley’s firm grip around her ankle and knew she was going back under.

Her hair moved differently below the water, though the braid still found its target; fastening itself around Riley’s forearm to prevent his escape. The power of the spray sent them tumbling together, round and round in a crazy whirlpool.

They broke the surface with a cough and a splutter, circling each other; legs and arms weak from exertion. The water it seemed, was feeling cruel too.

Maddison, who still held Riley’s wrist, yanked playfully before releasing him. β€œWhy did you stop? You could have been halfway to the Arches by now?” she asked, kicking her way to the embankment.

β€œThis was more fun.” Riley’s eyes narrowed. β€œBut you have something on your mind, otherwise you wouldn’t have made a mistake.”

β€œRelax.” Maddison pulled herself out of the water, scanning the area before she turned back to him. β€œIt was just a warm up.” She pointed to the ground, twirling her index finger in a deceptively lazy movement.

The water around Riley began to churn creating a powerful vortex. β€œYou never should have stopped,” she said with a wicked grin, and set of running. This time it was Maddison’s laughter stretching out along her path, in response to Riley’s howl of frustration.

Game on. Β Β 

31 responses to “5 Days – 5 Photos Challenge – Day 5: Firmani Falls”

  1. Charles Yallowitz Avatar

    Thought the prize was going to be the toy in the Happy Meal. πŸ™‚

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      Lol! McDonald’s hasn’t made it to the Enchanted Realm but it’s only a matter of time πŸ˜‰

      1. Charles Yallowitz Avatar

        Saw the Arches and that’s where my mind went. :/

      2. mbarkersimpson Avatar

        Yep, that’s where my mind went too when I created the name. But it seemed to fit the image of the rock formation in my mind so I left it. Your comment made me laugh out loud πŸ˜€

      3. Charles Yallowitz Avatar

        Happy to bring the funny. I can see the Arches idea in the picture now. πŸ™‚

  2. callummclaughlin Avatar

    You’re spoiling us with all these great teasers πŸ˜€ I’ve said it before, but I’m really excited about this series!

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      Thank you, Callum. I’m pretty excited too – though I guess with the number of times I’ve mentioned it, you got that! πŸ˜‰

      1. callummclaughlin Avatar

        Quite right πŸ™‚ You’ve worked hard and should soak up every ounce of excitement. Launching a new book is one thing, but a new series has got to be a big deal πŸ˜€

      2. mbarkersimpson Avatar

        It feels like it for this one, I must admit. Thanks again, Callum. You support means a lot πŸ˜€

  3. Jacqui Murray Avatar

    I’m with Callum. Come on, Melissa!

    BTW, I finished Firefly. I can’t believe it was only one season. The movie wrapped things up nicely, but I have so many questions.

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      Thanks, Jacqui. I can’t believe you’ve seen Firefly already! I know what you mean about the questions. If I can find it, I’ll dig out a link to the forthcoming web series – I’m not sure when it goes live πŸ˜€

      1. Jacqui Murray Avatar

        Oooh, I would love that.

      2. mbarkersimpson Avatar

        It is a web series called Con Man – you should look out for it. I’ve been looking for a start date but can’t find one, I’m sure it’s easier to find in the US!

  4. Silver Threading Avatar
    Silver Threading

    Mel, I can’t wait to read this! Thanks for joining in and finding renewed enthusiasm for your writing. It was great inspiration to me, as well. ❀

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      Thanks so much πŸ˜€ I’ve got the bug for short pieces I think. I’ll certainly be keeping up with my writing practice ❀

      1. Silver Threading Avatar
        Silver Threading

        You should do a weekly flash fiction challenge. That way we can all write a quick post and link to you. πŸ˜€ Mel’s Manic Musings Weekly Challenge! ❀

      2. mbarkersimpson Avatar

        I like that idea – how about Mel’s Midweek Writing Menagerie! I’ve been saying I’d do it since I stopped the prompts at Writing Room 101! ❀

      3. Silver Threading Avatar
        Silver Threading

        Sounds great! πŸ˜πŸ’–

      4. mbarkersimpson Avatar

        Thanks πŸ˜€ ❀

  5. www.ginabriganti.com Avatar

    Thank you for yet another wonderful look into Maddy’s world, Loved it!

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      Thanks, Gina. I’m so glad you enjoyed it. My work on the novel isn’t going as well as I’d like, so this loosened things up a little! πŸ˜€

      1. Gina Avatar

        I’m happy to hear that!

  6. Alex Hurst Avatar
    Alex Hurst

    You’ve got a talent for good pace in dialogue. πŸ™‚ The chase felt very much like one. I enjoyed the excerpts!

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      Thank you for the lovely compliment, Alex. I’m really glad you enjoyed Maddy and Riley πŸ˜€

  7. Celine Jeanjean Avatar

    That’s a great teaser, I like Maddison a lot!

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      Thank you, Celine. I’m so glad you like her πŸ˜€

  8. jazzfeathers Avatar

    Nice snippet. I like the relationship between these two πŸ™‚

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      Thank you πŸ˜€ They’re good friends, so their scenes are always a pleasure to write.

  9. Marje @ Kyrosmagica Avatar

    Enjoyed this piece of writing very much. πŸ˜‰

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      Thank you, Marje πŸ˜€ I love spending time with Maddison! She’s a new character, so I haven’t had my fill of her yet! I’m so glad you enjoyed it.

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