The Sacrifice – FRIDAY FICTION with RONOVAN WRITES Prompt Challenge #13

Friday Fiction with Ronovan Writes

Ronovan’s prompt this week:

  • Word Count of 500. (SUGGESTED)
  • Take your favorite quote from a movie and use it as inspiration for your entry this week. If you want more direction, make it the last sentence in your piece. (REQUIRED)

 

I’ve been unable to participate in Ronovan’s challenge for the last few weeks, and I’ve missed taking part. When I saw the prompt, and given that I wanted to write something for Valentine’s, I decided to go with it. It’s a little rushed, so I apologise for that, and I’m nervous about using the line because I know I didn’t do it justice. Not even a little bit. Still, it was fun.

To say I lovedΒ Deadpool isΒ an understatement. It might just be my all time favourite movie, and I think Ryan Reynolds did a wonderful job of bringing Wade Wilson to life. I was tempted to write a story in which I broke theΒ fourth wall, one of my favourite things about Deadpool, but I think I’ll save that until I’m feelingΒ braver!

So, it’s obvious by now, butΒ the line I chose is from Deadpool Enjoy πŸ™‚

The Sacrifice

Sebastian turned away from his partner, who was heaving his breakfast, and possibly everything he’d eaten in the last two days, onto the pavement. Darren was beyond green, the poor kid looked ready to pass out. It wasn’t unusual; crime scenes were never pretty, so when you were human and dealing with a whole heap of supernatural nasty, well, puking went with the territory.

β€œShit, man,” one of his officers ground out. β€œWho called Jeremiah’s posse?”

Sebastian followed the officer’s gaze to the two figures bearing down on them. The one in front, tall, built, and with hair prettier than his sister’s, wore a look Sebastian recognised. Ignatius Steele was an arrogant son of a bitch. Unfortunately, he was also the right person for the job, and they needed him.

β€œLook out, boys, here comes the elf squad.” Sebastian took in the berry-coloured suit, which shimmered like a second skin. β€œAnd they have a new uniform to boot.”

Ignatius gave a bow, immune to the jibe, as always.

β€œWhat the hell?” Darren straightened, one hand clamped around his waist as though trying to convince his stomach to stay put. β€œDid I miss the memo? Or are you wearing that for a bet?”

β€œHow would you like to cough up more than the contents of your stomach?” Isabella snapped, stepping in front of Ignatius.

Darren rolled his eyes, whether to fight nausea or impatience, Sebastian couldn’t be sure. β€œHow the hell did you hear about this so soon?”

Ignatius smiled, turning his distinguished features into the stuff of nightmares. Manic was too tame a word. β€œIt’s Christmas day, and I’m after someone on my naughty list!”

β€œActually,” Sebastian cut in. β€œYou’re getting your festivals crossed. It’s Valentine’s, so you dug out the elf suit for nothing. And when I say this, I mean it with all due respect, but you should never wear that thing, not even at Christmas.”

To this, Ignatius reached forward and plucked Sebastian from the ground. Despite his formidable strength, Ignatius didn’t hurt him, except maybe his pride. He crushed Sebastian to his chest as he roared with what could have passed for laughter, though, again with the manic. This wasn’t typical behaviour for the elves, but then, there was nothing typical about Ignatius.

When Sebastian was back on terra firma, he quit with the pleasantries, and got down to business. β€œWhat happened in that warehouse is so beyond evil it isn’t funny. No more jokes about holidays because, that in there.” Sebastian pointed over his shoulder. β€œIsΒ the kind of red you don’tΒ want to see, and there’s nothing left of the poor guy’s heart.”

Ignatius and Isabella stepped forward without another word. They moved into the warehouse, through to the gruesome scene that, even now, was burned into Sebastian’s brain. He looked to Darren, who was back on his knees, cursing everything that had passed his lips, and then followed the pair back into a nightmare.

The moment he crossed the threshold, Sebastian felt the rage leaking from Ignatius like lifeblood. He had his forehead pressed tight against his partner’s, and Isabella was murmuring in a familiar language, Sebastian still found difficult to process.

β€œWe have a problem,” Ignatius said, without looking at him. β€œYou were right about the evil, but you haven’t seen anything yet. This was merely the beginning. A sacrifice and a warning of what is yet to come.”

β€œShit.” Sebastian braced himself when he saw Ignatius move. He was glad he did because the elves’ eyes reflected the horror in the room. They were blood red.

β€œWe are going to need the power of a saint,” Ignatius said. β€œTo prevent the birth of a demon.”

Sebastian didn’t even hesitate. β€œTell me what to do.”

β€œCall on Orion. This is a job for the Collective.”

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Thanks for stopping by.

Mel

10 responses to “The Sacrifice – FRIDAY FICTION with RONOVAN WRITES Prompt Challenge #13”

  1. Callum McLaughlin Avatar

    Great stuff, Mel πŸ™‚ I’ve missed your short fiction so it was nice to see this pop up in my feed πŸ™‚

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      Thanks, Callum πŸ™‚

  2. Silver Threading Avatar
    Silver Threading

    I have got to see Dead Pool!Well done! ❀️

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      Thanks, Colleen πŸ™‚ I hope you enjoy the movie. I’m already planning to see it again! ❀

      1. Silver Threading Avatar
        Silver Threading

        It sounds good! πŸ˜ƒ

  3. Ronovan Avatar

    I do see what you mean about the quote. But I’ll tell you something. You nailed this piece. There was an imbalance of emotions that kept the reader not quite comfortable. So when you get Ignatius inside the warehouse it comes across just right. I’m jealous about you seeing the movie. Hrmph. πŸ˜›

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      Thanks, Ronovan. I probably should tell you I’ve seen it twice now πŸ˜‰ I’m so glad you liked what I did with the emotional tension…it was great fun to write!

      1. Ronovan Avatar

        Hrmph, we shall not speak of the mouth with a mask again. Hrmph. πŸ˜›

      2. mbarkersimpson Avatar

        Ha! My lips are sealed…though thankfully not sewn shut πŸ˜‰

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    […] The Sacrifice Must Read Melissa Barker-Simpson (Author Blog) Melissa is afraid she hasn’t done her quote justice. I’m not worried about the quote. The story is great. A nice range of emotion to capture the manic feeling in one of the characters. I thought the imbalance of the feelings was done nicely to give the reader the sense of imbalance as well. 633 words, 5.7 GL, and 1% passive sentence structure. @MBarkerSimpson […]

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