Interrupted – FF#25

Featured Fiction 2Before I get to the story, I must apologise that I’ve ignored the sentence starter again, and all the other prompts! I’ve spent the past couple of weeks with some of my favourite characters so when crime came up this week on Featured Fiction I jumped at the chance to spend time with them again. I haven’t broken all the rules – it is related to the genre at least πŸ™‚

I hope you enjoy.

 

Given that the sauna had been out of action for near on twelve hours, the small room should have been free from the suffocating heat Detective Charles Macavoy associated with such facilities. But even with the door propped open by a wedge of drift-wood, the air clawed at him, and there was a good reason.

The bloated, greying body of a man lay naked on the top tier of the seating unit. Nothing about him looked peaceful or relaxed; even in eternal sleep he looked bitter and twisted.

Charlie looked away from the wide-eyed, vacant stare of his victim and focused on the words scrawled across the far wall. They were written in blood. He’d bet his badge on it being the victim’s.

β€œJesus!”

He turned towards his partner, who stood at the entrance, covering his nose in the crook of his arm.

Bobby’s eyes shot to the words then. β€˜This one’s for you,’ he read, brow creasing. β€œThat’s a new kind of twisted,” he said, meeting Charlie’s eyes.

β€œAt least this guy has all his body parts,” Charlie responded, thinking about their last case.

He gave the victim one final look and pushed out into the main spa. β€œI need some air,” he said, over his shoulder and walked past the pool towards the exit.

The forensics team swarmed inside on his brief nod and got to work processing the scene.

β€œPeter’s up at the main house,” Bobby told him a few moments later.

Charlie took a deep cleansing breath and scanned the area. Peter Green had inherited the land from his parents. After leaving the military he’d set up his own practice in self-defence coaching and extended the property for his purposes.

The building behind them was used as a spa, with a well-equipped gym tagged on at the far right. In front of them stood the training studio, where Peter ran his classes.

Charlie’s eyes ran up and over the single story building and paused on the flat roof. The tall, composed figure, dressed in combats and a black t-shirt should have looked out of place. He didn’t.

β€œHe got here about five minutes ago,” Bobby said, following his gaze. β€œI played with him a little; made him show me his credentials,” he added, wiggling his brows.

Charlie smiled and forgot about his annoyance at finding him there. β€œGive me a minute. I’ll meet you up at the house,” he said, and walked across the path towards Jonathan Jukes.

β€œWhat are you doing here, JJ?” Charlie asked, waiting until green eyes swung in his direction.

JJ shrugged. β€œJust getting a feel for the land,” he said, in a calm, controlled voice. β€œIt’s my first time in Pete’s sanctuary.”

In two fluid movements he was down on the ground and facing Charlie with a grin. β€œI’ve had the speech, so you can save it. I’m nowhere near your crime scene.”

β€œYou shouldn’t even know there is a crime scene, so why don’t you try answering my question,” Charlie shot back.

JJ worked for Morgan and Fairchild, a security agency Charlie had worked with a time or two. The fact they were friends wouldn’t prevent him from asserting his authority if JJ stepped out of line.

β€œPete called it in,” JJ said, shrugging again. β€œHe’s a friend and as very little spooks the guy, I offered our services.” The grin widened. β€œJust a few security measures.”

β€œWhy do I get the feeling you know more about this than we do?” Charlie asked.

β€œIf you weren’t here shooting the breeze with me, Pete would be filling you in,” JJ said, glancing up towards the house.

β€œCut the crap, JJ. What’s going on here?”

β€œThe guy in there,” he answered, gesturing with his head towards the spa. β€œIs Stuart Warburton. He’s the reason Pete left the Marines, so you can imagine how it’s going to look.”

Charlie took a moment to process the information. β€œI’m going to need to speak to you later,” he said, resigned to the fact JJ wouldn’t let this go. β€œYou can give me your report.”

JJ gave a brief salute. β€œI’m here to serve.”

β€œYou got that right,” Charlie muttered and turned to walk towards the main house.

Saying that Peter Green was spooked, turned out to be an understatement. Charlie had never seen Peter look anything but composed. He usually had a quiet, unhurried manner and a serenity that put people at ease. None of that was evident in the man who met Charlie at the door.

His thick blonde hair was a mass of untidy grooves and plains, where his hands had journeyed in an unexpected nervous habit. His dark blue eyes were haunted, his athletic body buzzing with so much tension it made Charlie’s head spin.

β€œMac, it’s good to see you,” he said, practically jumping to one side to let him in.

Only one other person called Charlie by that name, and he wasn’t surprised to see Justin hovering beside Bobby.

β€œHere, drink this,” Justin said, shoving a glass of dark coloured liquid in Peter’s hand.

Charlie took a moment to watch Justin’s features. He too looked tense, with a worried crease marring his features – his concern for a friend. It was just plain weird to see such a grave expression on the kid’s face. It was normally alight with his sense of mischief.

Peter knocked back the drink in his hand and then started into the empty glass for a few moments. When he looked up, his eyes were sad.

β€œI know who’s doing this,” he said. β€œAnd it’s all my fault.”

Charlie put a hand on his elbow and steered him towards the living room. β€œWhy don’t we take this one step at a time?” He waited until Peter was seated on a high-backed chair. β€œHow about you start from the beginning.”

β€œWe used to joke about it,” Peter said, his voice faraway. β€œAbout what we would do to get back at our enemies. It was just talk, Mac, I swear. I’d never want this…never.”

Charlie walked to take a seat beside Bobby, who handed him his note-book wordlessly. It wasn’t hard to follow his short-hand, or get the gist of what he’d learnt so far.

β€œPeter,” Charlie began in a voice that held more patience than he felt. β€œI need you to talk me through what happened this morning, and we’ll fill the other pieces in from there.”

Peter nodded, gathering himself before launching into the events which had led to his call. As Charlie listened he also watched his reactions. He didn’t hear anything to prove Peter’s suspicions and he had an uncanny feeling that the case was about to get a hell of a lot more complicated before the morning was through.

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Thanks for reading.

Mel

10 responses to “Interrupted – FF#25”

  1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

    Reblogged this on Featured Fiction and commented:

    My take on this week’s prompt. I got a little carried away, and hope the characters aren’t confusing. Sometimes I forget people don’t know them as well as I do! There will be a part-two at some point. I didn’t want to break any more rules and go over the word count!

  2. callummclaughlin Avatar

    “eternal sleep” – You even manage to make death sound beautiful with your descriptive prowess. As always, I loved the piece and it’s great to see these characters again πŸ™‚

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      Thank you so much. I’m so glad you enjoyed it – they do have a special place in my heart, so it was a pleasure to spend time with them again πŸ™‚

      1. callummclaughlin Avatar

        Your passion for them leaps off the page πŸ™‚

      2. mbarkersimpson Avatar

        Thank you, that’s a lovely thing to say πŸ™‚ I want to do them justice. I have a lot of time on my hands today and am playing around with a new character (just for fun, not doing anything with him yet), but I can’t seem to get him just right. It’s fun trying though πŸ™‚ How’s the editing going?

      3. callummclaughlin Avatar

        It’s always exciting to explore a new character and see what path their story will take πŸ™‚

        It’s going well thanks, smoother than expected thus far. *touch wood*

      4. mbarkersimpson Avatar

        That’s excellent news πŸ™‚ Next you’ll be telling me it’s fun!

      5. callummclaughlin Avatar

        Now that really would be the first sign of madness! πŸ˜‰

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