Writers Quote Wednesday Writing Challenge – Waiting Game

This week for the Writers Quote Wednesday Writing Challenge (#WQWWC) the theme is Autumn.

The quote I chose is by George Eliot:

Delicious autumn! My very soul is wedded to it, and if I were a bird I would fly about the earth seeking the successive autumns. George Eliot.

There is something truly magnificent about autumn, and though we Brits don’t celebrate the holiday, itΒ is a time for thanksgiving. For the glorious colours that explode to life, even in death. For theΒ rich and pleasant smells, the wind on your cheeks,Β the fire in the hearth, and the warmΒ drinksΒ shared with friends.

I found myself inspired by the theme, so I created a few images to (hopefully) entertain you.

autumn-collage

autumn-pic

My inspiration for the piece of flash fictionΒ has its roots in my current project. Eventually I will get back to my other works but, as you probably know, I have lived and breathed the Collective for the last six months. I went in a different direction, and used a goddess (of autumn), a completely new character who is surprisingly vocal considering she’s only been in my head forΒ a day!

I’m considering a new series for the blog, and have been itching to find an opportunity to break the fourth wall – this might be it!

Waiting Game

There was a time when committingΒ an act of hubris meant great suffering, andΒ death.Β Not anymore.Β In Nearyon, arrogance andΒ pride are applauded, and coercionΒ will probably earn you aΒ pat on the back.

Given the sorry state of affairs,Β I should not have been surprisedΒ that a bunch of upstarts who call themselves mercenaries for hire took me from my home. The kind who, if gathering brain cells was as easy as reaping a harvest, they should be filling their boots. And the worst part – aside from the fact they’re idiots – they take cues from a damn playbook. I mean, seriously, they should get it over with and set up their ownΒ club –Β HubrisRUs.

Okay, so maybe I’mΒ a tad bitter because I haven’t figured out a way to escape, but still, myΒ jailers don’t evenΒ have powers to speak of. No. What they have is powerful friends with the abilityΒ to dampen a god’s power. I should be flattered that theyΒ took extra precautions with me (I’m Thera by the way – in case you were wondering), and put me in a cell that is guarded against earth magic. Which kind of sucks, since my power links to the elements.

Still, I’m not completely defenceless. It took me three days to recover from the dampening spell, butΒ it was worth the hours I spent plotting my revenge. The instant I came back online, I discovered a weaknessΒ (did I mention my jailers are idiots?) and, though I couldn’t pinpoint my location, I did manage to escape for a short time usingΒ astral projection.

I’m not going to lie, it didn’t exactlyΒ goΒ according to plan.Β My sisters have the same ability,Β and give that they had been searching for me, the momentΒ our connection snapped back into place they projectedΒ too. We sort of passed on the astral plane like ships in the night.Β It’sΒ one way to find entertainment, I suppose. WhenΒ you’re stuck inside a boxΒ it’s hard to find things to laugh at.

So, now it’s a waiting game. I can’t get out, but my sisters will find a way to get in, and together we will wreak havoc.Β As an added bonus, I willΒ free all the other prisoners and we might evenΒ create our own playbook – 101 Ways to Exact Revenge. Not particularly inventive, but let’s just sayΒ I have a one trackΒ mind.


 

It didn’t really go anywhere,Β except as an introduction of sorts.Β It’s my first attempt atΒ finding the right tone for the story and I wanted to keep it under 500 words.Β It’s a work in progress shall we say πŸ˜‰

Thanks for stopping by

Mel

Thanks also to Colleen and Ronovan for inspiring us each week.

autumn

 

26 responses to “Writers Quote Wednesday Writing Challenge – Waiting Game”

  1. Silver Threading Avatar
    Silver Threading

    Mel, your images are simply stunning. As always, your writing speaks to me! A goddess… of autumn! I love it. I am intrigued on where you will go from here. Take me away to your land far away! ❀

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      I guess I had the sisters from Greek mythology in my head, but with a twist of course! πŸ™‚ I’m so glad you liked the photos I chose. Thanks, Colleen πŸ™‚ ❀

      1. Silver Threading Avatar
        Silver Threading

        Always a pleasure, Mel. ❀

  2. Silver Threading Avatar
    Silver Threading

    Reblogged this on Silver Threading ~ Fairy Whisperer ~ and commented:
    Mel’s visuals of autumn are spectacular… AND, take a sneak peek at a new character she is sharing – A goddess of Autumn! Had to share! ❀

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      Thanks, Colleen πŸ™‚ You do inspire us with these Wednesday challenges and autumn is such a spiritual season! ❀

      1. Silver Threading Avatar
        Silver Threading

        Absolutely, Mel. ❀

  3. Annette Rochelle Aben Avatar

    splendid! simply splendid! ❀

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      Thanks, Annette. That’s so kind ❀

  4. Oliana Avatar

    Goddess of Autumn, I love it!! Your writing is so entertaining and your images are inspiring. I love autumn!!

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      Thanks, Oliana πŸ™‚ I love autumn too. It’s such a magical season, I couldn’t resist exploring the new character!

      1. Oliana Avatar

        Very intriguing character!!

      2. mbarkersimpson Avatar

        I’m glad you think so πŸ˜€

  5. Jacqui Murray Avatar

    This definitely puts me in the Autumn mood, Mel. I’ve been cold all day, an overcast sky. Not like California summer at all!

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      The weather here is odd, too. I thought a little colour might perk people up!

  6. Callum McLaughlin Avatar

    Great visuals! I love the idea of a goddess of Autumn as well 😊

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      Thanks, Callum. The number of images related to the season is a sight to behold! πŸ™‚

  7. vivachange77 Avatar

    Wonderfully creative images. This is my favorite season and I love to imagine a Goddess of Autumn.

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      Thank you – I love to imagine her too! πŸ™‚

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  9. Bernadette Avatar

    You are so very creative. Your visual images are magnificent.

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      Thank you so much πŸ™‚

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    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      I’m so glad πŸ™‚ Thank you.

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  12. Vashti Quiroz-Vega Avatar

    Hi Melissa! I love how you included all the senses in your post. Beautiful words and images make me excited for autumn to come. πŸ˜‰ xx

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      Thanks, Vashti πŸ™‚ I’m excited too xx

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