Beatrice the Warrior Bee!

After a discussion with Vik (Vik Tory Arch) about bees (she happened to mention she’s part of a beekeeping business). The subject of warrior bees came up, and it probablyΒ won’t surprise you to hear I was inspired to write a story! I did a little research, but for those who are knowledgeable about bees, I apologise for any mistakes in the tale πŸ™‚



Life can be hard. When you’re responsible for a whole colony and the fate of the queen rests on your shoulders, it can be tough. Okay, so I’m elevating my position a little, but it’s how I feel.

I’ve worked hard all my life, which granted has only been several weeks by human standards. Yet in the life of a bee, I’ve chalked up quite a few hours.

Today I’m on guard duty, and it’s not my favourite way to spend the day.

Brittany sauntered past me, shaking her derriere in a happy dance. I looked away from her signals, bored out of my mind. An arrogant rumble came from Bart, who was lounging in his usual position, affecting an authority he doesn’t possess. All he’s good for is mating and when he’s fulfilled thatΒ role he’ll be out on his ear.

A flutter of activity caught my attention to the left and Bart was forgotten. It was the wasps. Again. They were always vying for the amber nectar, theΒ honey we worked so hard to produce.

I glared at Winston, the one who’d been sniffing around for days and felt a trickle of indignant rage. He’d brought his friends to the party.

Signalling to my sisters weΒ formed a barrier to the hive, prepared for battle.

Winston and his goons dived, going for gold.

In a flurry of activity we attacked. We might have been on the defensive, but this was our home and we would protect it until the death. Protect our sisters, our mother, our right to exist.

It was a massacre; biting, stinging and fighting with everything we had. I’m not sure when the tide turned, but as I saw Winston’s spent body drop out of sight, his few remaining compadres beat a hasty retreat.

I scanned the hive, counting our losses. My eyes fell on Bart’s prone body and I quickly worked out what had happened. He’d been protecting the queen and though he didn’t have a sting, he had a pair of fierce looking mandibles.

I buzzed around him, humbled by his honourable death. He wasn’t a useless piece of ass after all.


Thanks for reading

Mel

20 responses to “Beatrice the Warrior Bee!”

  1. callummclaughlin Avatar

    I never thought I’d feel so emotional over a bee. Lovely story, Mel.

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      You and me both! I may have wrote about them, but I still jump three feet when I see one πŸ˜‰

  2. viktoryarch Avatar
    viktoryarch

    That’s quite a beautiful story, perfectly depicting the bee’s life. What a battle they had?! Beautiful posts. Thank you for writing it. Now is my turn. I will link mine when I will finish it.
    Best wishes.

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      Fabulous – I’ll look forward to it πŸ™‚ Thanks so much for your kind words. I’m glad you liked it.

      1. viktoryarch Avatar
        viktoryarch

        I loved it.

      2. mbarkersimpson Avatar

        πŸ˜€ Thank you x

  3. Bee’s Life | Vik Tory Arch Avatar

    […] Beatrice and I mutually decided to do the “Bee Warrior” Writing Challenge. Her amazing story posted here. […]

  4. viktoryarch Avatar
    viktoryarch

    Here is a link to my short bee challenge writing
    http://viktoryarch.wordpress.com/2014/09/18/bees-life/
    I hope you like mine as I have enjoyed yours. Thank you for giving the idea to write about bees.

  5. lauzlau Avatar

    I loved your bee story and I did feel teary at the end. Hope you continue with more from these bees!

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      Thanks so much. I’m glad you enjoyed it πŸ™‚

      1. viktoryarch Avatar
        viktoryarch

        Maybe you could do a little bee stories, like in series of short stories?

      2. viktoryarch Avatar
        viktoryarch

        Aye, aye…

  6. taylorgraceauthor Avatar

    What an imaginative story! I loved it! Very cute!

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      Thanks πŸ™‚ it was a lot of fun! I was trying to enamour myself with the little buggers, but it didn’t completely work. In fact, yep…I’m still terrified!

      1. taylorgraceauthor Avatar

        Bees are scary. Just the sound they make is pretty freaky. Still, the story was super cute. I loved their ‘jobs’!

      2. mbarkersimpson Avatar

        Don’t even talk about the sound they make – I’m on my way to bed!

        Thanks for your kind words. I’m really glad you enjoyed it. I researched the jobs in a colony and actually learnt quite a lot. Like the fact the females are kick-ass warriors πŸ™‚

      3. taylorgraceauthor Avatar

        That’s pretty neat! Females tend to kick butt in the animal kingdom. Rest well!

  7. Jacqui Murray Avatar

    I love this! I have never in my life been inspired to take several hours to write a short story (that required research) on bees. You are amazing.

    1. mbarkersimpson Avatar

      Ha! Thank you. I’m glad you enjoyed it. There was a suggestion to make it into a serial, but I’m not quite that mad πŸ™‚ I appreciate the compliment – I suppose I deserve points for staring at pictures of bees, given my phobia!

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